Looking good Trevor and to all participants so far.
This is a small contest with not-so-attractive prize (sorry, I'll make it big next time).
I don't want to give advices on how to improve your entries because what if your entry is not chosen (the winner)? I do not want to waste anyones time as I understand everyone is busy. But thanks for taking the time to create a logo and entering the contest.
And although the prize is small, keep in mind that you can add Cal Poly Forums artwork in your portfolio.
And if you really do want a suggestion on your artwork, I'll be happy to help.